Adoptables Spelling Mistakes Thread
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Oval Charm's description currently reads "An oval charm said to decrease the amount of time spent waiting to breed Pokémonémon again at the Day Care."
It should be fixed to read "An oval charm said to decrease the amount of time spent waiting to breed Pokémon again at the Day Care." I've seen other spelling/grammar mistakes as well in various Pokémon descriptions, but I don't remember which ones. If I come across them I'll post them to this thread. If anyone else finds them, please mention them here as well
It should be fixed to read "An oval charm said to decrease the amount of time spent waiting to breed Pokémon again at the Day Care." I've seen other spelling/grammar mistakes as well in various Pokémon descriptions, but I don't remember which ones. If I come across them I'll post them to this thread. If anyone else finds them, please mention them here as well
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Thanks! I fixed the Oval Charm typo.LinneaBorealis wrote: ↑Wed Mar 16, 2022 4:38 pm Oval Charm's description currently reads "An oval charm said to decrease the amount of time spent waiting to breed Pokémonémon again at the Day Care."
It should be fixed to read "An oval charm said to decrease the amount of time spent waiting to breed Pokémon again at the Day Care."
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I've seen other spelling/grammar mistakes as well in various Pokémon descriptions, but I don't remember which ones. If I come across them I'll post them to this thread. If anyone else finds them, please mention them here as well
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I found another two!
For Zubat's description, it currently reads: "While living in itchblack caverns their eyes gradually grew shut and deprived them of vision. They use ultrasonic waves to detect obstacles."
It should probably be changed to: "While living in pitchblack caverns their eyes gradually grew shut and deprived them of vision. They use ultrasonic waves to detect obstacles.
For Golbat's description, it currently reads: "However hard its victims hide may be it punctures with sharp fangs and gorges itself with blood."
This needs to be clarified a bit: "However hard its victim's hide may be, it punctures with sharp fangs and gorges itself with blood." Posts automatically merged.
For Zubat's description, it currently reads: "While living in itchblack caverns their eyes gradually grew shut and deprived them of vision. They use ultrasonic waves to detect obstacles."
It should probably be changed to: "While living in pitchblack caverns their eyes gradually grew shut and deprived them of vision. They use ultrasonic waves to detect obstacles.
For Golbat's description, it currently reads: "However hard its victims hide may be it punctures with sharp fangs and gorges itself with blood."
This needs to be clarified a bit: "However hard its victim's hide may be, it punctures with sharp fangs and gorges itself with blood." Posts automatically merged.
No problem, I'm always glad to help!
Bad Oshi, go to your room and think about what you've done.
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@LinneaBorealis I fixed the Zubat and Golbat entries!
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Found 3 more:
This evolution item is called the Satchet, but in its description it's called the Sachet. Sachet is the correct spelling. Mesprit's description currently reads: Known as The Being of Emotion. It taught humans the nobility of sorrow pain and joy.
It needs some commas to be correct: Known as The Being of Emotion. It taught humans the nobility of sorrow, pain, and joy. Aerodactyl's description currently reads: A ferocious prehistoric Pokémon that goes for the enemys throat with its serrated sawlike fangs.
The "enemys" needs an apostrophe: A ferocious prehistoric Pokémon that goes for the enemy's throat with its serrated sawlike fangs.
This evolution item is called the Satchet, but in its description it's called the Sachet. Sachet is the correct spelling. Mesprit's description currently reads: Known as The Being of Emotion. It taught humans the nobility of sorrow pain and joy.
It needs some commas to be correct: Known as The Being of Emotion. It taught humans the nobility of sorrow, pain, and joy. Aerodactyl's description currently reads: A ferocious prehistoric Pokémon that goes for the enemys throat with its serrated sawlike fangs.
The "enemys" needs an apostrophe: A ferocious prehistoric Pokémon that goes for the enemy's throat with its serrated sawlike fangs.
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@LinneaBorealis Fixed, thank you!
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@LinneaBorealis also if serrated and sawlike are being used as adjectives there is supposed to be a comma in that Pokedex entry "serrated, sawlike fangs"
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Ooh, good catch.I love squirtle line wrote: ↑Wed May 11, 2022 6:25 am @LinneaBorealis also if serrated and sawlike are being used as adjectives there is supposed to be a comma in that Pokedex entry "serrated, sawlike fangs"